Horror review

11.       When I was writing this story I was think of the things I'm afraid of and most of the things I'm afraid of are being home alone and hearing noises. Also I'm afraid of people in mental hospitals. That’s when I came up with my story. I just kept putting situations together and my story came from that.

22.       I found that the middle was the easiest to write because I was in the heat of my story and the climax was coming together. I kept coming up with good ideas for the next part and my thought were flowing.

33.       The very beginning was the hardest part for me because I didn't know how to start the story and I was thinking of ideas for the story. It took me a while to figure out what I would put next in my story.

44.       I’m feel that my story was written with a lot of thought and time, so I would have to say that I give my story a 9. Not a full 10 because I could have used better explanations on certain parts.

55.       I think I deserve an A- because the story was a little rushed towards the ending.

66.       On my next writing project, I will explain more and go into more detail about everything. I think that would make my story ten times better

Different Person

          The night was rough I was struggling to sleep. With all the things going through my head I decided to go to my window and sit there and look at the stars. Upon sitting there I witnessed a shooting star at that moment I wished that I would get the chance to trade lives with an unattractive homeless person.  I wished this for myself because everything might not be as bad as it seems and I would learn to not take things for granted. This way I would not get down on myself about all the little bad things that happen in my life. After I wished I went back into my bed to try to get some sleep. The morning had rolled around, I woke up to cold winding blowing on me and birds chirping next to me. I found myself in our town park, lying on the bench near the play ground.  I was confused on how I got here, and why the park out of all places? I looked at my body to make sure I didn't get hurt. Upon looking at myself I noticed I was wearing really dirty, ripped old clothing. I remembered at that point what I wished for that night. I honestly didn't think it would really happen, but by the looks of it, it had happened.  I got off the bench and started to walk around, I noticed everyone was looking at me really weird. In a way that made me feel way different from everyone else. I was thinking to myself, is this really how they feel, unloved, weird, and useless. I kept walking around, I didn't know how I would get food, so I started asking people for money. Everyone was ignoring me, so I decided to get louder and stand on tall things ,but I noticed that I doesn't matter how loud or tall you are. You need to be good at something or impress people if they are going to give you money. I that point I started dancing, everyone loved me and the money was pouring in. once I got tired of dancing I decided to pick up all the money and go and get food somewhere, because I was to hungry to function. When I went to get food it seemed as if no one wanted to serve me. I made them those because I was starving. When I got out of the restaurant I went back to the park and sat there wondering if this is all they do with their lives. I realized that I don’t know what I would do without my phone or nice close or a decent meal.  I came to a conclusion that I needed to change who I’m because it’s not all about the things you get and it’s not right to be selfish.