Horror review

11.       When I was writing this story I was think of the things I'm afraid of and most of the things I'm afraid of are being home alone and hearing noises. Also I'm afraid of people in mental hospitals. That’s when I came up with my story. I just kept putting situations together and my story came from that.

22.       I found that the middle was the easiest to write because I was in the heat of my story and the climax was coming together. I kept coming up with good ideas for the next part and my thought were flowing.

33.       The very beginning was the hardest part for me because I didn't know how to start the story and I was thinking of ideas for the story. It took me a while to figure out what I would put next in my story.

44.       I’m feel that my story was written with a lot of thought and time, so I would have to say that I give my story a 9. Not a full 10 because I could have used better explanations on certain parts.

55.       I think I deserve an A- because the story was a little rushed towards the ending.

66.       On my next writing project, I will explain more and go into more detail about everything. I think that would make my story ten times better